Joe- love it. Much clearer narrative, convincing and now the day of the dead look makes sense. Only comment would be is that there's a few parts where the motion shots are a bit repetitive, you had some beautiful stillness in the previous edit where she was in front of the mirror and looking out of the window. I might also remove the sound during the scene where she pushes the camera away from her? Just because it's not a dominant feature throughout and it doesn't really make sense in the context of the clip. It was a really good idea to introduce yourself as a character within the narrative and it then plays on the relationship between you two as a couple, but also there's that lovely synergy with the fact that your character is essentially singing to her and the lyrics have more meaning then. Awesome Joe, well done.
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